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    dots Submission Name: Throw Your Duece Up feat. unknowndots
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    Author: Robbing Hood
    ASL Info:    16/m/Ark
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 26/35/10
    Words: 719
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 706
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 4565



    Description:
       Waddup yall, this is our first song with unknown, or the dark side, i hope you enjoy this shit!

    Much Love and of coarse Duece


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    dotsThrow Your Duece Up feat. unknowndots
    -------------------------------------------


    [maninthemirror]
    s-h-a- to the N tripple X
    AK with the Duece, we demand respect
    you were just sitting there and I cut your neck
    doctor shanxxx cut your neck with that telepathic affect
    Boo hoo motha fucka cry baby cry
    kiss my dark blade as I stab you in the eye
    put your duece up, mutha fucka don't bluff
    A bullet in your dome, and there come out the brains and stuff
    I'm 17 deep, cause thats how a ride
    77' continental represent the southside
    don't think the dueces play, when we slanging the tree
    you might comeout with a coma, what you know bout me
    I'll go ahead answer for you cause I know you can't handle it
    zero, you don't know, I see your fear, youre just a kid
    I'll give you a break for now but watch for cracks
    one step in the wrong direction puts you in a bear trap
    in case you don't know, I do deliver
    one bullet out the chamber when I pull the trigger

    the world's brought down by this sound that surrounds/
    it's obvious why we're considered the flyest around/
    the masses held in awe by the style that we bring/
    bow down and kiss the rings of the Aberrant Kings/
    now, throw your duece up/
    (repeat chorus)

    [unknown soilder]
    This is my first time flowing with the Aberrant Kings/
    More blood on my hand than any man in the Lord of the Rings/
    Wield blades with uncanny precisionómaking decisions/
    On whether I should answer questions that concern my religion/
    Robbing Hood steals from the rich so he can give back to the poor/
    Whatís in store?/
    To never give up is what I solemnly swore/
    The pain is my center, my core/
    Step on broken glass as mirrors smash on the floor/
    But the man in the mirror always remains/
    He can never be tamed/
    You can say his flowís crazy, insane/
    Ready to die, you can blaze me and stain/
    My white tee with blood and the cells of my brain/
    Iíll always exist, watch me resurrect through my name/
    Go crazy because of what I inject in my veins/
    I donít act, I just direct to get fame/
    Sealing the pact with packs of cocaine/
    Sorry if I digressócanít be labeled the best/
    Iím merely completing the rest/
    The game needs me cuz Iíll leave it with balance/
    This shit wasnít handed/
    It took years to develop belief in my talents/
    Now Iíve become in touch with the truth/
    Even the haters will through up the duece/

    the world's brought down by this sound that surrounds/
    it's obvious why we're considered the flyest around/
    the masses held in awe by the style that we bring/
    bow down and kiss the rings of the Aberrant Kings/
    now, throw your duece up/
    (repeat chorus)

    [robbin hood]
    Throw your duece up, plaer and hater/
    Killa since old day, kindergarten, later alligator/
    I explode like suppa bomb/
    gangsta mode gets turned on/
    from dusk to dawn, till next noon/
    the greatest, were comeing real soon/
    from Plaza to McCain/
    Robbin comeing with that acid rain/
    Acidic attack I got the greatest on my back/
    Arkansas, where I born, where I stay/
    dark side & ak/
    we let the lead spray/
    No & Ark is where its at/
    teaching those not in the know of how to act/
    in the preascense of a K-I-N-G/
    unknown & me/
    will split a mutha fuckin wig or two for free/
    the greatest we are soon to be/
    no, no, scratch that out/
    were already there, but that you should know about/
    now I'm diffrent, I've picked up the mic, it's change/
    somebody tell young p I found the ticket to fame/
    then somebody tell heavy knowledge I found a way to prove my knowledge/
    shit man, we ain't even need to go to college/
    so throw your duece up for the game is no longer the same/
    Arkansas and Nawlins, dangerous like hurricane/

    the world's brought down by this sound that surrounds/
    it's obvious why we're considered the flyest around/
    the masses held in awe by the style that we bring/
    bow down and kiss the rings of the Aberrant Kings/
    now, throw your duece up/
    (repeat chorus)





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    ||| Comments |||
      hey hood...this was go0d....I'm commenting on this cause I don't feel like commenting on some [censored] I haven't read...so yeah...deuce man
    | Posted on 2006-02-25 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]
      Gangsta rap????
    I was not ready for that. This rap was kind of hot. I did like it and I WISH I could have herd it aloud instead of reading it. The middle verse was my favorite. I am small time rap fan but thats only because I don't believe most rapper deserve to be famous for rapping, but this was better than average. As you keep working on your craft just remember that youre sending a message when you speak publicly . ( sorry for sounding like a grandma)

    great write
    l.l.collins
    | Posted on 2005-12-31 00:00:00 | by L.L.COLLINS | [ Reply to This ]


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