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    dots Submission Name: Promise Keeperdots
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    Author: AnointedPoetess
    ASL Info:    22/Fe/MN
    Elite Ratio:    2.12 - 127/178/49
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsPromise Keeperdots
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    One whose word will never fail,
    No matter when it was spoken,
    His promises are sure,
    So keep the faith,
    When a promise is given,
    Knowing it will come to pass,
    when the Lord's timing is right,
    not ours.




    Submitted on 2005-12-31 12:13:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      If you allow yourself to be given to God then he will make sure that you always walk in the right direction...that you are always secure...that you are happy...and that you will be safe. Always. Most overlook the power they are unable to see...but you have been blessed to see that power.

    Never lose that.

    Much love,

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2006-01-26 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      u know its the second time today someone s tellin me that the lord does things in his own time... i guess that answers my question to god... thank you... u kinda he;lped... its a great poem.

    karen
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by submarine | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very short, which isn't too much of a bad thing, although some might think it too short. You might want to change your wording slightly on the third line. Try "His promises are sure".
    On the plus side though, the words are so true.
    This made me feel encouraged because I completely agree with your message.
    | Posted on 2005-12-31 00:00:00 | by E.S. McLaughlin | [ Reply to This ]


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