One whose word will never fail,
No matter when it was spoken,
His promises are sure,
So keep the faith,
When a promise is given,
Knowing it will come to pass,
when the Lord's timing is right,
If you allow yourself to be given to God then he will make sure that you always walk in the right direction...that you are always secure...that you are happy...and that you will be safe. Always. Most overlook the power they are unable to see...but you have been blessed to see that power.
This is very short, which isn't too much of a bad thing, although some might think it too short. You might want to change your wording slightly on the third line. Try "His promises are sure". On the plus side though, the words are so true. This made me feel encouraged because I completely agree with your message.