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    dots Submission Name: Limerickdots

    Author: BenCollier
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 425/386/88
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Limerick/Comedy
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       A cute limerick hatched by my kids (all 6 of 'em) on the way home from visiting grandma for the Holidays. We played "create a limerick" and this was the best.

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    I once knew a silly armadillo
    Who liked to sleep on a spiked pillow
    However, in his dream
    He sprung a blood stream
    And cried like a weeping willow

    Submitted on 2006-01-01 11:54:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was a very cute limerick. Tres original and pretty funny. I have to say it made me giggle. Sometimes I don't think I get enough humor in my life. Thanks for writing stuff like this... it's so different from all the depressed angst poems on the site.
    | Posted on 2006-04-23 00:00:00 | by Cai | [ Reply to This ]
      Very cute little piece here! I love to get with the kiddies myself and create cute limericks. You'd be surprised at some they can come up with.
    Thanks for sharing!

    | Posted on 2006-01-06 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Isn't it fun to see what the kiddies can come up with - it was pretty clean so they must be young! Hope your holidays were awesome and you all enjoyed each other! Happy New Year! Love,Peace,Joy & Smiles to share!
    | Posted on 2006-01-03 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Hehehehehehehe. *Laughs*
    Heeheehee * giggles*
    hohohohohoh* guffaws*
    Ok, it wasn't that funny. It's more chuckle level than guffaw level.

    Um, I've seen better, but it's not bad. You might want to change the rhythm of the second stanza; lymerics should be mercilessly rigid in following that certain lymericy rhythm.

    "I once knew a silly armadillo
    who slept on a pointy, spiked pillow"

    That's betta, I think.

    Pretty good, though.
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by Jeniffer | [ Reply to This ]
      hee hee, that's cute.
    aawww, the poor little armadillo!
    i like armadillos (even if they are stupid enough to sleep on a spiked pillow), however, i must point out that armadillos have a very hard outer body shell, like a suit of, um, armor! those spikes must have been huge and sharp!

    but a cute little limerick, and by children!
    my, my, my. I always thought children were a waste of valuble time.

    yeah, sure i do!
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by Avril54 | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice, a Limerick that actually made me laugh. The rythem isnt quite right on the first line but the fact that its done by your kids is fantastic, always good to get children involved.
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by Smee | [ Reply to This ]
      that is well hmmmm rather cute happy new year by the way . any way you always do those silly things and never fail to put a smile on my face. well i need a cig so bye

    that girl
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]
      This is cute
    I dont read much limericks on this site but I do wish people would submit more
    I have been toying with the idea of writing a couple such as 4 limericks and putting them together into one write
    You brought back that idea to my mind
    I Thank You for that
    God Bless

    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    | Posted on 2006-04-20 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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