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    dots Submission Name: Prayer For A New Daydots
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    Author: dmm
    ASL Info:    50/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 741/888/102
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Passion
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       I was never sure if sharing this prayer was the right thing to do but as this is the beginning of a new year I decided I would. It is the beginning of each day for me.


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    Dearest Father I pray that You will look down
    with mercy and grant Thy blessings upon all of my friends and family especially those most in need.
    Give me strength and help me to be a good man and a kind man and treat my fellow human beings with love and understanding.
    I thank You Lord for all the blessings You have
    bestowed upon me and I pray that You will send down Thy angels to guide and protect me this day.




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      I dont want anyone to be religous! I would rather they just became a Child of God, then all lines and barriers would be nill and void.
    A prayer is just what we all need, and if we all ask this one imagine the results!
    Get out the soapbox and lay it to us! Grab the oil and water and lets get this revival on its way. Hand out the white hankeys and pass the kleenex the alter will be busy tonight.
    Later
    | Posted on 2006-01-06 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
      I love prayers and I find such comfort in speaking to "IT"
    It's not about being religious as much as it is about being thankful - something we all can do & you wish unselfishly for others before yourself & that says a lot Dan!
    Love,Peace,Joy&Smiles 2 share
    tif
    | Posted on 2006-01-06 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      What a beautiful prayer that we all should surely pray. Thanks for sharing!
    Hope you had a great New Year!

    God bless,
    ~Linda
    | Posted on 2006-01-06 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi Dan,

    I think prayers say more to us about ourself than they say to God. If you get a chance, check out Rumi's poem about Moses and the shepherd.

    This one says wonderful things about you.

    I love the sincerity and simple beauty in your Psalm.

    Nice!

    Chrystine
    | Posted on 2006-01-02 00:00:00 | by beatthedrum | [ Reply to This ]
      I would have to agree with Graeme...and although i dont pray very often and am no longer religious...i can really appreciate the simple yet beautiful and sincere words that you have written here.. :)
    | Posted on 2006-01-02 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, this is appropriate. I hope we don't have any disasters this year like Katrina or the Kashmir earthquake', not to mention the tsunami of 2004. I think the world is still reeling from those wounds. I hope you have a great 2006, Amy
    | Posted on 2006-01-02 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this a very wonderful prayer dan, one in which most people could utter, it has a lot of heart and love in it and belief and said very well, God Bless happy new year to you and yours adnil
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by adnil | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, Dan, I'll say thank you for sharing.

    I'm not in the teeniest bit religious, but that doesn't stop me appreciating the sentiments in your words, and if I WAS religious, I'd like to pray something like that.

    Thanks again, may you get all the blessings you deserve

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]


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