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    dots Submission Name: Left Medots
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    Author: Smee
    ASL Info:    17/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 28/33/11
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 226
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 675



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    dotsLeft Medots
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    She left me with a sullen stare
    Filled with blades, it cut me deep
    I couldn’t take her silent glare,
    I wanted passion, I needed heat.

    She left me twisted, old and broken
    Half the man I was before.
    I spoke no words though my mouth was open,
    And sank to knees upon the floor.

    I should have begged I should have pleaded
    What was wrong? And how to mend?
    I could have said twas her I needed.
    This day could not be the end.

    With my silence I did squander
    All the chances that I had.
    Now I sit alone and wonder,
    Will this silence drive me mad?




    Submitted on 2006-01-01 14:45:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This was powerful and I loved it. A man letting his emotions pour out is so compelling but the piece is good for more than that. You did real good!
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by Mytee | [ Reply to This ]



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