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    dots Submission Name: High kinda Lovedots
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    Author: Dutchess_aira
    ASL Info:    20/f/HI
    Elite Ratio:    3.75 - 38/42/19
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 288
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 773



    Description:
       Love and smokers don't mix especially when they rather smoke then spend time with you


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    dotsHigh kinda Lovedots
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    If I told you I loved you, would you care?
    If I told you to hold me, would you open your arms?
    If I stood in the rain crying, would you join me and get wet?
    All the things a lover wants to know when falling in love.
    He told me he would be there,
    that he'd love me forever
    And when she came by with that glow in her eye he split without saying a word.
    He puts her on his lips smoking her sweetness From the root to the tip,
    Hazed in a dazed she gives him what he wants What his body craves everyday..the sweet high He wishes to gain...yea I couldn't do what she Does I could only give him unconditional love
    I guess that wasn't enough to go up against her High kinda love.





    Submitted on 2006-01-01 15:52:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is interesting
    You nare writing this as thou you are questioning your meaning of the word Love
    This is very important to ones Life
    I too have been in this very same situation
    I really like the way you worded this write
    Very Nicely written
    God Bless
    Ron

    Please if you get a chance take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Chick I really like this 1. I see u put your heart in it. So there is nothing I can say but great write. Keep doin this style it works for u.
    | Posted on 2006-01-03 00:00:00 | by dawn_voluptre23 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this. It has a different slant on love without just the smoking element. Very honest and crisp. It got all the features a good poem should have. I got no beef with it. Satisfaction achieved!
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by Mytee | [ Reply to This ]



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