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Into battle we must go to fight for freedoms sake to wage a war against our foe riding the boat across the wake The boat glides and hits the sand Our hands grip our rifles our heads move and pan open the hatch and into the stifle bullets race across our cheeks close friends have fallen the enemy hides, its him we seek one solider sits and is balling I pick him up and slap his face together we must storm the hill a lone broken solider must give chase run against the wind and make things still he has a grenade to throw at the mound we have his back and shoot at the gunner he lobs the grenade and theres no sound smoke and silence, a vicious stunner the battle won and the hill is taken its home we go and celebrate success we cry for the lost ones and the foresaken ours souls are drenched with the death and excess if a lone solider can courageously take a hill with enemy at his toes and back then people can beat their tired wills and win against their own personal attacks |
I think you mean 'soldier', buddy-boy -- fix that up and you've got a pretty poem. A little literal, but it has a nice 'Flanders Fields' kind of power to it. RE: the comment by Isis -- I think I got a definite WWII vibe here. But maybe that's just me.| Posted on 2006-05-24 00:00:00 | by Corvettlaufer | [ Reply to This ] | i think the line a solder sits and is balling should read bawls... but maby it's me? anyhow I did enjoy reading this, my favorite part was the last stanza. I was wondering though if you are talking about this war or just a war in general ? | | Posted on 2006-01-02 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ] | |