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Stolen Moments


Author: Emerging Soul
ASL Info:    48/VERY female/Wisconsin
Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 1240 /1114 /244
Words: 315
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Stolen Moments



My heart misses you
We talk
You admit your insecurities
I vent my anger
I soothe your anxieties
You tell me a stupid joke
To make me laugh
I can hear relief in your voice
I close my eyes
So happy that I make a difference
I find that my anger is gone
Diffused
Replaced by loneliness
By longing
By need
I ache for you
Wishing to crawl through the telephone
And be held within your arms
We would lean into each other
Forehead to forehead
Exploring the sweetness of kisses
And the feel of your hands
Exploring my body
I would feel lush beneath your palms
Open and liquid and fire
Fed by the knowledge
That this time is stolen
Surreptitious
I remember this
As I talk to you
And you can hear it in my voice
"Don't be sad" you tell me
"Someday we'll be together again"
And I am suddenly unconsolable
Weeping with need
And you comfort me
Unable to bear feeling my pain
Sometimes it's so hard
But worth it, we agree
So I shake my mental-self
And reach beyond the ache
Not wanting to waste even one moment
This time it is me telling the stupid joke
I hear your watery smile
We are, as always, in tune
Yes
Let the moment pass
Move on
Rebuild our strength
Feed off of each other's love
So that we may part again
Temporarily recharged
Temporarily soothed
Temporarily fortified and renewed
I need you like air
And marvel
That you need me too
What would I do without you?
The thought is too much to bear
So I tuck it away
And smile as I hear you ask
"What color are you wearing today?"
Our familiar play
And as I enhance your visual picture with words
We close our eyes
And are together again
"Call me later..."
Good-bye
God, I love you




Submitted on 2004-04-27 08:43:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  the longing and love and , well, simply emotion show up so well in this piece. it's saddening that one would have to go through this heartache, but sometimes we do. i like this.
-dandan
| Posted on 2004-05-04 00:00:00 | by Dandan | [ Reply to This ]
  This sounds like longing...I mean no, disrespect...just my opinion...and your title goes well...with your poem.
| Posted on 2004-04-27 00:00:00 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ]
  this sounds like longing to me too, it sounds to me like a love gone arye, liek you had a this great love and it started to slip away and you are trying to retrieve it again, its a good write, keep it up
| Posted on 2004-04-27 00:00:00 | by gigglygirl | [ Reply to This ]
  This is very good. Its what I want more than anything at this point in time, to be with someone. Reading this made me think of them, thank you.
| Posted on 2004-04-27 00:00:00 | by JimweiZERO | [ Reply to This ]


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