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    dots Submission Name: rejse *journey*dots
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    Author: Artist4rent
    ASL Info:    20-F-København
    Elite Ratio:    2.91 - 37/32/31
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 204
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1368



    Description:
       Had the opportunity to see my grandmothers village Zakopane, Poland life changing moment, stories came alive..... just a moment I will treasure


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    dotsrejse *journey*dots
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    She left her home
    50 years ago
    Just a minute passed twenty
    With tear filled eyes
    And final embraces to be held
    The train whistle came
    Her newly wed’s hand held tight
    Their childhood village in last sight

    A new world they said
    Words of freedom spoken
    They had each other, right?
    A future now awaiting
    The trains whistle to a boats engine
    The boats engine changed to foreign voices
    And time took hold

    Fast forward 50 years
    Now with Grandchildren grown
    Her husband soul at rest
    Her sorrow was let go
    A chance to go home
    Has come and gone
    Now stories are what are left
    Of the place she called home

    Her children’s children eyes bright up
    Every story told
    The village tucked away in mountains
    The open market of old
    Of hard times but quality people
    Theses stories caught the smallest ears
    A child’s dream only to see
    The land which brings stories to life

    The smallest took the risk
    Alone found her way
    Across many lands and borders
    Found the storytellers dwelling
    Tears filled her eyes
    As she step off the train
    Just a minute passed twenty
    And a new world to be seen




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    ||| Comments |||
      I liked this the flow was great and the thought-process behind this was brilliant. A truly refreshing read. Well done.

    Bravo,
    Jermaine.
    | Posted on 2006-01-03 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]



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