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    dots Submission Name: Ghost of Youdots
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    Author: PolaroidMemory
    ASL Info:    18/F/IN
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 99/93/28
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 251
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1147



    Description:
       This poem might be a little rusty. It only took me about 5 minutes (if that) to write it. If you have any suggestions, please let me know!


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    dotsGhost of Youdots
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    Won't you please come back from the dead?
    I miss the imprint of your body in my bed.
    I'm sorry what we had didn't work out.
    You knew me well, knew what I was all about.

    I talk to your ghost at night when I sleep.
    When I awake, you're nowhere around and I creep
    Back to my room.
    Thinking about all the times that we shared.
    The good and the bad, through it all I knew you cared.

    Tired am I of seeing your face in the mirror.
    My mind is racing and I can't get my thoughts clear.
    I get calls from our old friends.
    It brings back memories; why can't it end?

    I promise myself I'll visit your grave tomorrow.
    I just can't do it; causes too much sorrow.
    The house is so dark and I see your face in the walls.
    The house is so quiet and I hear your footsteps in the halls.

    Still I go on and live through everyday.
    I get by in my own special way.
    I know I'll see you again sometime.
    When that day comes, you'll be mine.
    Again...




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