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    dots Submission Name: my girls would be news reportdots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 645
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       this is somewhat funny to me... so I chose to post it and see what all of you thought of it....please nobody critisize grammar or whatever..I really don't care... if I don't talk to you and you have never read anything else of mine....please just don't comment....you are not in my little circle of happiness.....so just go to helll


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    if yo are going to be misinterptreted in anyway, why not go into the music industry. People misinterpret your songs, some don't appreciate your style, groupies flock t o you like flies on shit. No onej jappreciates the thought that goes into each individual bar of every song. Not only that, but people will misuse your style, like in the case of Insane Clown Posse, you have abunch of idiots painting their faces and jumping around like retards screaming, "I'm a fucking ninja!"... Or in the case of my boyfriend's ( thats me everybody) group, I accidentally misuse the deuce by throwing it up to every unworthy muther fucker in town. I even used the wrong damn hand. Musicians can be so sensitive




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      daeg, ur girl's crazy. she seems like a cool chick and she does have a point. yeah i more or less hate rappers who have no skill but people still like them because they put out one "hit" record. it's funny that ur gf can't through up the deuce the right way.
    | Posted on 2006-01-07 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      This was different...kind of a little rant you got going on here. There are a lot of people out there that will do whatever it takes to make a dollar. And...the sad thing about it...it works.

    The famous "One Hit Wonder" that takes care of a bunch of people with no skillz whatsoever...who are the idiots that supported that ish...

    Well...let me put my foot in my mouth...

    I did like New Kids on the Block, Vanilla Ice, and Milly Vanilly. LMFAO! I AIN'T EVEN GONNA LIE! LMFAO!

    Good rant!

    Li
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]


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