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    dots Submission Name: one thoughtdots
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    Author: bugsy
    ASL Info:    26/male/england
    Elite Ratio:    4.27 - 56/70/25
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/
    Total Views: 167
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 872



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       this one is a bit strange, the only way i can explain it is that i was watching pitch black at the time.


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    dotsone thoughtdots
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    There are no changes made to hot got pot for got dor freo
    When she was so willing to sacrifice us all, shut your fucking mouth, how much do you weigh now?
    Aint none of us gonna make it, we’re 105.
    Kept calling it murder when I did it
    We drag the body 40, 50 feet behind us
    Not too a big a job for you is it
    I bet you they don’t make it
    It’s the journey I’m interested in
    Just one rule, stay in the light
    Told you to ghost me
    How can they help you?
    What do you have?
    Blind spot
    Cheap shot
    I’ll take those
    “They’re killing each other”
    “Let ‘em play”
    -“Playtime is over.”
    -“But I’ve just come out!”
    “Dude, get with it."
    “You’re screwed in the head you”
    Do you wanna watch this Bugs,
    Or shall I switch the fucker off?




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      well i've never seen pitch black...but i decided to comment anyways even though it might be hard to if this has to do with the movie or whatever...though my first impression of this before reading the description...was i thought it was part of a story...not really a poem...i'm not agreeing with litllost...on it not making sense...i read it and it makes sense...but it seems like its broken of from a bigger part of something...purps
    | Posted on 2006-01-05 00:00:00 | by purplesun24 | [ Reply to This ]
      Well I'm not sure if the last line was about bugsy malone or bugs bunny! I'm sorry, the whole thing was lost on me, it made very little sense at all. Perhaps it does to you though, even that, I'm not sure of lol. Anyways, unusual, definitely unusual.
    | Posted on 2006-01-03 00:00:00 | by litllost | [ Reply to This ]



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