Description: My exboyfriend turned out to be the asshole people warned me he could be...
Now I'm moving onto some one else who is my dream guy - only I'm awake
From Hate to Happiness -------------------------------------------
After months of your lying
And me still believing
I'm giving up on you
And trust me, I'm won't be grieving
Call me a whore
But I'm already moving on
To the sweetest guy
Who wont do me wrong
I met him months ago
And purely by luck
I was always 'playing nice'
But now I don't give a fuck
Because he's so close to perfect
And he's so flippin' great
We've got a lot in common,
He's got me believing and fate
And so not I'm sure there's
A reason why we fell apart
Because I'm so much happier
With him in my heart
Aww, this is really sweet. I loved how you just seemed to burst out and say "He's so flippin great", hehe that was cool. But on the last stanza...I really got hung up on the last sentence..it didn't make any sense to me.
And so not I'm sure there's A reason why we fell apart
I didn't get that...but the rest of the poem was great.
I like this piece of work, it really conveys the emotions of hate and happiness, as if they were battleing. I dunno that's just what i got, I know how it is, I think I like this one so much because I kinda just did the same thing. Well anyways I like the piece. Georgina
This could be a great piece about moving on to better things but with some speeling errors & word misplacement, it was kind of confusing. I understood the point of your piece & I've 'been there, done that' but it needs revision. ~Tonya
Submission Name: From Hate to Happiness
