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    dots Submission Name: The Releasedots

    Author: Tarek Refaat
    ASL Info:    24/m/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 370/508/212
    Words: 312
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Releasedots

    The Release

    Today I have shed a tear
    Out of anger
    Out of frustration
    And out of aggravation

    I stress myself to so many limits
    Why I donít know?
    When will it end?
    I still donít know

    I was standing there all alone
    And the tear started sliding down
    Is it life that is cruel to me?
    Or am I cruel to myself?
    Or do I blame myself?
    Do I blame myself for every dream that shatters?
    For everything that matters?
    For all the pain I feel inside

    Am I the reason for all the bleeding?
    No but Iím the reason the wounds get inflamed
    The cuts get infected.
    Iím the reason my tear slid today
    And stopped a flood on its way

    Today I realized
    Iím one big monster hiding inside
    Consuming myself

    I talked and talked
    With many a few people who care
    And it really made me change the air

    I needed to feel the truth
    And not to step on myself once more
    I know am an ok person
    And nothing more

    Nothing more to say
    What comes my way,
    I will take today
    What comes tomorrow
    I will take tomorrow

    I feel a huge relief
    After getting out all the grief
    Perhaps I havenít released the flood yet
    But I hope it will disperse
    And the river shall be calm once more

    I owe myself a lot
    For which I have hidden from a lot

    I feel the energy moving back
    I feel the pain soothing
    The anger calming
    And the rage easing

    A warm shower really made a difference
    And all the minds and hearts who listened as well

    Now I can close my eyes
    Now I can sleep tight.

    And I know Iíve got back
    My energy to fight

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