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    dots Submission Name: odd four linerdots
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    Author: sword stalker
    ASL Info:    18/female/home
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 27/27/16
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 717
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 169



    Description:
       just a strange thought i had


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    dotsodd four linerdots
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    I see your soul shining to me…
    give into my fantasy…
    I’m your queen and you’re my king…
    let us dance into ecstasy





    Submitted on 2006-01-03 19:45:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awwww i wonder who this was about! do i know him? oh well i dont expest to find out. it's fasinating to see other peoples images and thoughts of love and passion because they are as different as the people themselves. yours seems rich and light while mine is dark and mysterious without a sence of time or money. you did a good job on the spelling and gramer. also it flowed well. it's short but sweet good job.
    keep on the keepin' on,
    mheracai
    | Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by Saphire Twiligh | [ Reply to This ]
      This was short but pretty cool, a very nice write indeed. It was refreshing and simple. I would have loved to read more but I guess leaving us wanting more was a part of the idea, huh.

    Peace,
    Jermaine.
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      it was very simple but still managed to convey a lot of emotion. though i don't think i quite understand the purpose of the ...'s ( i know they have a name i just can't remember it right now, its driving me crazy) especially sense they're in the first 3 lines but not in the last one. but i still like it a lot, i'm putting it in my favorites.
    | Posted on 2006-01-03 00:00:00 | by art_is_hard | [ Reply to This ]


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