awwww i wonder who this was about! do i know him? oh well i dont expest to find out. it's fasinating to see other peoples images and thoughts of love and passion because they are as different as the people themselves. yours seems rich and light while mine is dark and mysterious without a sence of time or money. you did a good job on the spelling and gramer. also it flowed well. it's short but sweet good job. keep on the keepin' on, mheracai
it was very simple but still managed to convey a lot of emotion. though i don't think i quite understand the purpose of the ...'s ( i know they have a name i just can't remember it right now, its driving me crazy) especially sense they're in the first 3 lines but not in the last one. but i still like it a lot, i'm putting it in my favorites.