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    dots Submission Name: The Crooked Mandots
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    Author: nodrelsnef
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 22/32/29
    Words: 277
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Written while watching young man in a wheel chair.


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    dotsThe Crooked Mandots
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    .The Crooked Man

    My God, I’ve got no way out of this cold.
    What is this empty madness?
    I’m a very skinny and weak person,
    Sick from birth, most likely,
    And you made it very cold out here.
    You gave me a crooked leg
    And a long, ugly, crooked face.
    I can only walk very slowly.
    People have to wait for me
    And they hate me for being so pitiful.
    They are so kind to me for being so pitiful.
    How I would like to dash that kindness
    Against the rocks with a thousand blows!
    Make them knock me in the snow
    And let’s have at it!
    Let me test my strength
    With these bony arms you’ve given me.
    Allow me to kick some powerful prince
    With this crooked leg.
    And let me dash their kindness with these strong, cruel eyes.
    For I am a man
    And no one knows it but I.
    (For I am a tiny pip of a man)
    They offer me their seat
    And I would like to crush their skulls.
    They all know my name but
    No one knows the horrible fires that burn
    In this skinny bosom
    Where it has been shown to me
    There is truly a difference between a man and a beast.
    I have no chance for sexual prowess.
    Nor can I defend my rights as a man
    For I am weak and ill prepared
    And I am a lonely man.
    But my soul it wider than the bowels of Hell
    And I pray that someday they will know my soul
    And that someday they will tell me
    They know I am a man.






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