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    dots Submission Name: The Same Pagedots
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    Author: Indigo Kid
    ASL Info:    33/f/everywhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.73 - 428/438/115
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsThe Same Pagedots
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    Mine is made from true bark and
    drawn from an ink pen with a feather
    plucked from an eagle held proud
    and strong.

    Yours is from ball point pen and cold,
    perfect, machine lined paper carefully
    manufactured for the masses
    to behold.

    Mine carries proudly its ancestrial smile
    laced with mistaken words and
    misunderstood moments spread across
    its pages.

    Yours carries all the guilt of childhood and
    flashes of freedom and looser times
    which glow in its jeweled clad
    gypsy ways.

    Both covers carry scars and nicks with
    thready edges on loosely bound leather.
    So, why is it that we can never be
    on the same page even when things
    seem so perfect and delightful for
    the other?





    Submitted on 2006-01-03 23:31:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It is called individuality my Friend
    I am not saying that individuality is 100 percent good
    To many people are afraid to let others into there life
    I believe they are afraid they will be hurt again
    If only we could as a race realize just how easy world peace and love for our fellow man is
    As The Beatles said
    All You Need is Love
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      KID! Where the hell ya been? Oh, it dont matter I've probably just aint been paying attention...but this...this is just freakin awesome! I really dont know how to relate how it hits me, but I do know its one of the best things I have ever read on here and I like the strength and attitude behind it. Awesome. Thanks!
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Well done. His cold and shallow it seems words mean nothing next to yours that have true meaning. Not on the same page because you are in different books...just there is a similar theme. Sorry...rambling...nonesensical. Great poem, I enjoyed it.

    XOxoXO,
    me
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by angelfyre | [ Reply to This ]
      i have never given a WOW! to anyone on this site before but this poem grabs me by the throat. It just shows the difference in something as simple as a book,but on the other hand people are just the same. Some are filled with dust and others are brand new. Relationships are the same way, just as no book is the same,each one tells a different story and resembles different characters, and some characters just can't be on one page together, like the wolf and little red riding hood. well i like this alot, this is definitly a winner.
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Louis Dcree | [ Reply to This ]


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