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    dots Submission Name: on the twelfth day of Christmasdots
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    Author: ertha
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    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Cheesy Joke/Misc
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       this is absolute nonsense i know...but I am weak in the head


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    dotson the twelfth day of Christmasdots
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    On the twelfth day of Christmas my true love gave to me
    twelve brandies bubbling
    eleven grannies griping
    ten fingers creeping
    nine lives for living
    eight grades of wrapping
    seven sisters singing
    six cats a-spraying

    five other things
    four cans of Stella
    three fisherman's friends
    two woolly gloves
    and a fibre-optic artificial tree




    Submitted on 2006-01-04 04:59:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I prefer to give all politically correct presents so my love got something from around the world;
    Voldka, Ale, Rum, Wine, Brandy, Scotch, Burbon,
    a little hard Cider from the barn and just a nip of Rolling Rock, No Tequila, I want all of her clothes left on.
    With that selection we can have months of fun not just twelve short days.
    However, I do think you might enjoy all those creeping fingers. I'd send those sisters out for a ride with those fisherman and the grannies, and drink the cans alone under the tree.
    But, they were your twelve days, who am I to mess them up!
    Very cute little reminder of how sick and tired we are of those worn out tunes.
    Later
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
      Hee hee! Damn you got some [censored]ed up [censored] for christmas! Better than coal in your stocking I guess! haha! This is a fun kinda light hearted kinda christmassy kinda poem. All I can say about christmas is...I AM GLAD IT IS OVER! One more christmas commercial and I was gonna freak out! haha! Ok...only 11 months and some odd days left...better go shopping! hee hee! Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]


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