This one was awesome! I especially enjoyed the way you used questioning tones and seeming appreciative manners in describing something with such flair and beauty yet not wasting needless words. Excellent job!
this poem made me stop and think of all the times i have watched in glorious wonder the sun rising, it also made me want to hold my son and blanket him like the sky blankets us. thank you for the imagery. Happy Daze
this is beautiful, Tiffany. this is a love song to God, to nature and all its glory. i love the idea of the wind whispering a memory like a kiss on your cheek... sweet! this is exactly how i woke up this morning.. what beauty and wonder awaits us in life if we just keep our eyes and hearts open.