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    dots Submission Name: Embrace the Skydots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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    Bytes: 458



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       Back to work - the rains have subsided & the mornings are filled with awe-inspiring color that tickles the imagination.

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    dotsEmbrace the Skydots
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    How surreal this morning sky
    painted with hues of blue & pink
    a sweet embrace of you

    Blanketed by the softness
    sprinkled across the meadow
    sweet morning dew

    Oh, the touch of your wind
    whispering me a memory
    a kiss upon my cheek

    This sunrise
    a cry of love
    in color
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    Embrace the Sky









    Submitted on 2006-01-04 13:19:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is another very beautiful write from you
    You captured the beauty of a new day and put it perfectly in words
    Thank You for sharing this write
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-02-08 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      This was a sweet and brief poem Tiff. I loved everything aboutit. Nice flow and feel to it. great job. Great imagery, it made me feel like I could see all this. Great job.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-01-05 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiff,

    This one was awesome! I especially enjoyed the way you used questioning tones and seeming appreciative manners in describing something with such flair and beauty yet not wasting needless words. Excellent job!

    Meow!
    | Posted on 2006-01-05 00:00:00 | by lynxstarfire | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiff,
    This was really a beautiful piece with much Thanksgiving of beauty and grace! I can just picture it. An early morning dew sparkling and shines as the sun starts to rise on this lovely morning.
    | Posted on 2006-01-05 00:00:00 | by AlabamaFarmGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      I enjoyed this. Short and swee. My favorite kind. It's good u notice such things. We have to all do that more often.

    PinkFairy
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by PinkFairy | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem made me stop and think of all the times i have watched in glorious wonder the sun rising, it also made me want to hold my son and blanket him like the sky blankets us. thank you for the imagery. Happy Daze
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]
      A sound message this carries. 'Look around and glory in the beauty that surrounds us all'.

    I enjoyed reading this - it was very good.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this sweet romantic poem. The imagery is wonderful and so is the flow. The only thig is that it could be a bit longer, other wise it is a sweet, short and beautiful poem.
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Autum-Moon | [ Reply to This ]
      this is beautiful, Tiffany. this is a love song to
    God, to nature and all its glory. i love the idea
    of the wind whispering a memory like a kiss on your cheek... sweet! this is exactly how i woke up
    this morning.. what beauty and wonder awaits
    us in life if we just keep our eyes and hearts
    open.

    much love to you, sweet diamond girl!
    ~Cat
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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