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    dots Submission Name: The Tears of Iredots
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    Author: dax
    ASL Info:    35 male BC Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.87 - 127/127/42
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 450
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    Description:
       I am of Irish, English and Scottish background and I wrote the poem partially due to that reason. But more importantly it is for everyone who has lost someone loved to them through the violence of war or just plain stupidity which applies to war also.



    We say we live in a civilized world but look up the word civil and other context words and you may say differently after. Thanks for having me aboard.

    I also had this poem, my first submission to any one published by The Interational Poets Society and am wanting to make a go at writing as more than a hobby.


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    dotsThe Tears of Iredots
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    A bonny lass sits by the sea,
    weeping her tears over thee.
    To form the hue of the ocean wave,
    for untimely loss she could not stave.
    These words to wars got out of hand,
    and death itself now stalks the land.
    Caused by men of nations that prolcaim their will,
    pressing the blood of men in Hates' distill.
    The loss of love does haunt her now,
    as nations all o'er make Loves' head bow.
    A prayer for peace she offers up,
    so the bread of love, men may sup.
    That these tears she cries aren't in vain,
    for a tranquil Ire to console her pain.




    Submitted on 2004-04-27 13:31:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It reminds me of Ireland. Very Irish indeed. But i liked how you wrote about it from the view of a girl who has lost her love to war. It was very deep and i enjoyed it alot.
    Jan,
    | Posted on 2004-07-02 00:00:00 | by Jan | [ Reply to This ]
      subject in my book is the damage of war as well as the stupid people or well, illpeople who wage them for unessacary reasons ,and the fanatics that take so many a special person so innocently yet they claim a purpose ,well you picked a votile subject and it can get heavy,so good luck and write more ,lead by example and you helped me today i got the message ,lets hope more do huh paulie d

    peace+love+you=writing/dont stop laddie were in a bit of a jamm this world here.
    | Posted on 2004-04-28 00:00:00 | by paulie d | [ Reply to This ]



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