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    dots Submission Name: my drug songdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 938
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    Bytes: 789



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    dotsmy drug songdots
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    my doobie doobie doobie doobie!
    closer then my peeps are to me
    weed you show me that affection
    you keep out of detention
    going back to the penetion
    when I get out i'm going to need the witness pertection.

    In spite of my behavior, said your my savior
    It's all good when you're young, you have pure fun
    Can't be a fool, son, what about the long run
    life is one big party when your still young but whose going to have your back when it's all done
    my doobie doobie doobie doobie!
    smoking it in the long run

    I always mention
    show so much attention
    my doobie was there through my incarceration
    I wanna show the hallucinogen my appreciation.




    Submitted on 2006-01-04 17:01:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      one thanx for the commet, two i like this its different then most...at least i think so i like the way u ryimed(spelled wrong) the words anyway i think it was exulent great write!
    | Posted on 2007-01-19 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      hallarious!!!!!!!forget that [censored] comment on bottom, only true smokers understand the potential. lol
    | Posted on 2006-12-18 00:00:00 | by shayla8911 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes! I'd love to care about weed more than my friends and the fact I'm poisoning myself. That's pretty retarded. Do you really have NOTHING better to do in your spare time?
    | Posted on 2006-01-15 00:00:00 | by LostInTheClouds | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this is funny as all hell, well smoking is ba so stop it, that [censored] will get you in trouble but just reading the songs it appears that you all ready know that, that is a good question though did you write this while you were high, getting high?lol not like it really matters but one last thing Zabriel is right, you are not very good at spelling now are you? don't feel bad i'm a terrible speller i just tend to look my stuff over but i never get it all.

    ~liz~
    | Posted on 2006-01-05 00:00:00 | by Fadingperson | [ Reply to This ]
      I don't get it... All I see is that you're singing about how much you love marijuana, and that you can't spell properly. I really don't like it at all.

    Were you smoking when you wrote this?
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Zabriel | [ Reply to This ]


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