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    dots Submission Name: The basketdots
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    Author: Atrip187
    ASL Info:    21/Male/Some Alley
    Elite Ratio:    4.53 - 81/76/21
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 228
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsThe basketdots
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    Im no leather coat,
    no lucky cap,
    so Im treated like crap,

    No designer jeans,
    not a silk shirt,
    so im left to hurt,

    I dangle unoticed,
    and fall uncaught,
    never to be saught,

    Overworked,
    Worn thin,
    left turned outside in,

    One of so many,
    Sniffed and tossed,
    dropped and lost,

    A lonely sock.




    Submitted on 2006-01-04 18:44:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You gave a sock pesonality and feelings.

    Very well written.
    At first I thought it would be a riddle but then you gave it a name.
    To echo the other comments above, cleaver and funny.

    I can relate to the sock. HAHA

    Respect and Admiration

    Clyde
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Wisdom Seeker | [ Reply to This ]
      loved this...i see its catorgarized as serious...so even though the lines seem humorous i caught the underlying meaning that you are portraying through a simplistic yet styish metaphor...purps
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by purplesun24 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really really love this poem. I have read it a few times and I like it more each time. I'ts clever, funny, sad, wow it's just great. I wish I could write like this. Excellent.
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by litllost | [ Reply to This ]



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