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    dots Submission Name: Wonderfully Endless (song)dots
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    Author: beatthedrum
    ASL Info:    55- F - Southern CA USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 881/810/122
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 732
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 304



    Description:
       This is the full version of the song the town's people sang in the poem Wonderfully Endless Thing. If you haven't read that piece, doing so may help put this into perspective.

    I hope you enjoy it.


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    dotsWonderfully Endless (song)dots
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    Love is a very magical, plentiful,
    wonderfully endless thing.
    Sew the seed, water and wait.
    It begins deep within
    Reaching up and then
    It sprouts and spreads
    To be a tree
    Filled to the tip
    With love...
    So we sing
    (repeat)




    Submitted on 2006-01-04 22:47:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Chrystine
    This write created a very warm felling for me
    I really like how you gave the trees real life in this one
    I like to write a lot like that too
    Once again Great Job
    Your Friend
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-01-05 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I read the other poem and thought it was pretty cool. <3 Likeafolktalepoem or like the song "the dreaming tree"... o-o the entire poem itself could be sung in that respect. Twas nice <3
    Sweet-kickass meaning.
    >D
    | Posted on 2006-01-04 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]


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