Amazing, I think it can be really difficult to convey emotions through so few words but in all honesty thats how love works. I dont think that many poets can manage to produce such a simple and effective message. Keep writing and I will definitely read more of your work.
wow, that really is short and sweet! i'm not a great fan of love poems, but this just sums everything about love up so perfectly that if it were any longer it would just spoil the whole effect. This style is good in convaying the simple profound message, but i dont think that it would work for every poem. however, it definatly does in this one!