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Author: Saaber
ASL Info:    20/m/BD
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 101 /99 /26
Words: 80
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Not so good, I agree myself, but it's TRUE. And try to make something out of the first letters of each line...


Of all the people I know, she is the one I love,
But how do I know that
She will love me back too?
Endlessly I keep thinking about her,
So much that I cannot think of anything else;
She is the one I am obsessed with now,
Internally struggling to escape reality somehow
Onwards to a place where there is only her and I,
Never coming back to this place where my dreams can only die...

Submitted on 2006-01-05 09:53:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I liked this...does this have anything to do with anyone special *winkwink* anyway, i love that you were able to spell Obsession downwards, very nice!
| Posted on 2006-03-01 00:00:00 | by darkwinged | [ Reply to This ]
  "Never coming back to this place where my dreams can only die..."
-awesome line with so much truth. keep up the superb work.-
| Posted on 2006-01-11 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]

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