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Author: Saaber
ASL Info:    20/m/BD
Elite Ratio:    2.95 - 101 /99 /26
Words: 115
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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No matter what you guys comment, I am ready to accept it. This is a true tale of my pathetic love life, and I hope to give this to her someday...
Becaue after what has happened with her, I can not tell it to her directly...


Sometime ago I was ready
To tell you how I feel
No matter what the consequenses or the outcome
No matter how you react with this ordeal.
Then I found that you were down,
Filled to the brim with grief
And that was what I was not hoping,
So another world's weight added to my shoulders,
Instead of the long expected relief.
Now I am stuck,
Express my love I cannot
More of a shodow I shall become
Your obsession if I am to overcome
But remember you I will always,
The girl who I lost even before finding
For this is the time we go our separate ways.

Submitted on 2006-01-05 10:25:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  The girl who I lost even before finding
i love that line.
this poem had its moments, it was a bit sweet in a sad kind of way. don't take that wrong, it's good.
| Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by fabulousAMY | [ Reply to This ]
  so much to do with ur present life, huh? gud poetry, but maintain the rhyme and don break it. chek this line again coz i din get it
"And that was I was not hoping,"
| Posted on 2006-01-11 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ]

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