Sometime ago I was ready
To tell you how I feel
No matter what the consequenses or the outcome
No matter how you react with this ordeal.
Then I found that you were down,
Filled to the brim with grief
And that was what I was not hoping,
So another world's weight added to my shoulders,
Instead of the long expected relief.
Now I am stuck,
Express my love I cannot
More of a shodow I shall become
Your obsession if I am to overcome
But remember you I will always,
The girl who I lost even before finding
For this is the time we go our separate ways.
| The girl who I lost even before finding|
i love that line.
this poem had its moments, it was a bit sweet in a sad kind of way. don't take that wrong, it's good.
|| Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by fabulousAMY | [ Reply to This ] || so much to do with ur present life, huh? gud poetry, but maintain the rhyme and don break it. chek this line again coz i din get it|
"And that was I was not hoping,"
|| Posted on 2006-01-11 00:00:00 | by obaid | [ Reply to This ] |