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Spur Of The Moment Poet

Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 104
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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lol you'll get it if you read it..Anyways i want thoughts.

Spur Of The Moment Poet

Coffee stained pages
with lipstick smuges
written with a broken piece of
tarred black charcol
eyes set on perfecting
something that can't be perfected
sour smell of the breath
after just waking up
more sour than the night before
smile so fake, yet
even we can't tell
it paints a picture of words
unheard wordsthat were
uttereing softly from those lips
the eyes old and tired
losing the once burning fire
those smiling lips slowly
frowing upon the page
in a notebook...
the life of a spur of the moment poet
trying hard to meet a deadline
once true to words
is so unfulfilled.

Submitted on 2006-01-05 17:29:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i like the detail the way you descire everything puts me right with you i love how you take something from its high point and make it fade down to its lowest point exposing its true side nice poem keep writing i'd love to read more
| Posted on 2006-01-05 00:00:00 | by Scary-shorty | [ Reply to This ]
  this is a really powerful poem! you say in so many ways "writing for writings sake" but dont actually say it. Its one of those true gifts of poetry writing, that you dont see every day!
You have a real tallent, but try not to write poems on the things that you are comfortable "think outside the box"
| Posted on 2006-01-05 00:00:00 | by bambi144 | [ Reply to This ]

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