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    dots Submission Name: drepression's questions <draftdots
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    Author: WandWielder
    ASL Info:    21-f-maryland
    Elite Ratio:    4.42 - 55/62/16
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This is just a draft of a poem i wrote when in one of my prego mood swings when i just couldnt explain why i felt the way i did at the time.


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    dotsdrepression's questions <draftdots
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    Tears streaming down my face,
    A knot in my stomach
    That will not go away
    My throat is tight
    But why?
    I just cant put a name to the feeling in my soul
    To the confusion thatís there
    Angry one minute
    Crying the next
    Where is the strong person I used to be?
    It faded away like drift wood in the sea

    I cant talk to you
    Every thing you say
    Is pacifying lies
    They disappear from existence
    As quickly as they leave your lips
    Iím tired of sacrificing
    Of being the one to let go
    Its time for me to get a life
    A dream of my own.




    Submitted on 2006-01-05 21:03:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I have been through five pregnancies with my wife. Each were differnet but the mood swings were the same.
    I can't tell you how it feels but I can sympathize with you about it.
    Here I am 25 yrs later still married to the same beautiful woman with no regrets.

    Besides, I always thought she was beautiful when she was pregnant.

    I do like the poem for its honest feelings during a time when most women feel they look their worst. When moods have no meaning because they are what they are.

    Hell, I even craved for my wife during the last one. Go figure on that one.

    Well, I have rambled enough.

    Still this was nicely done

    Respect and Admiration

    Clyde
    | Posted on 2006-01-06 00:00:00 | by Wisdom Seeker | [ Reply to This ]


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