Psychic Skin
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Psychic Skin
I love your valleys and shadows; how they look under the lights, so velvet and smooth with my heart beating in time with you. Being guided by the music and your motion moving the air around you and so eloquently into me with swirls that influence everyone in the room. How slippery I feel when I am there with you on that floor; the melding of us rolling into one another with rhythmic silence and pulsing sound. Your hands and how they are so coordinated with my mind and how you know exactly what I am thinking right now at this very moment as I write this and how you are thinking the very same thing… |
Submitted on 2006-01-06 01:49:52 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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O...M...G...!<-this says it all. Great poem. Though I really like structured rhyming poetry, this has broken my science. I love how the lines blend together. Guess it must be some Psychic thing...| | Posted on 2006-01-27 00:00:00 | by Imadjinn | [ Reply to This ] | i liked it i agree with my shadow your talking about sex and being able tounderstand one another with out words rite? like the connection you have rite? I had that with the girl of my dreams but hey all good things come to an end sooner or later | | Posted on 2006-01-06 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ] | Wonderful poem. Real feeling of love. I like the movement and interplay. The site insists I write more than the previous but you don't need advice on writing, you can do it. | | Posted on 2006-01-06 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ] | |
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