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    dots Submission Name: A Whole New Medots
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    Author: Eah
    ASL Info:    20/F/KY
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 74/81/22
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 144
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    dotsA Whole New Medots
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    The New Year,
    a whole new me,
    a me that doesn't wait,
    that doesn't waste time,
    that doesn't allow you to walk all over me.
    A me that me is harsh,
    and cold,
    and wont break for anything.
    I wanted this once,
    but you changed my mind.
    You opened my eyes
    to someone who cares with their heart,
    and not with expectaions of want in return.
    I long now for that paitence,
    that love and kindness,
    the kindness that is willing to wait,
    that is willing to walk off the path
    and deviate from social conformity
    if it means whats best for you and I.
    The New Year,
    it brings a whole new me,
    this is the time for smiles,
    and hugs, and laughter.
    I can only hope that I can share it with all.




    Submitted on 2006-01-06 19:18:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it. It makes me kind of sad though. I'm not sure why. The part that stuck to me the most was:

    "I long now for that paitence,
    that love and kindness,
    the kindness that is willing to wait,
    that is willing to walk off the path
    and deviate from social conformity
    if it means whats best for you and I."

    I like the way you wrote that. Very nicely done.
    Great job

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2006-01-07 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]
      To be honest, this piece doesn't say much to me. I only like the one line, to deviate from conformity. But hey, here's a good website for new years resolutions, man. http://resolution.geek-foo.net/ Yeah, they're pretty funny and whatnot. Peace. -rue
    | Posted on 2006-01-07 00:00:00 | by Rue | [ Reply to This ]



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