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A New Year

Author: Dawnyd
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A New Year Poem

A New Year

Memories of the year gone by
It goes by so quick, gone, in the blink of an eye
Every year you make plans for the year ahead
Then you can't always do them, so you live with regret instead
A beautiful new year has again arrived
So don't be discouraged, and never put your plans and resolutions aside
You must never give up having goals, hopes, and dreams
With persistence and patience you indeed will succeed
Before you know it another year will again have gone by
Maybe this year you will be counting your accomplishments with happiness and pride
No matter what happens good or bad
Just think about those who have nothing and the year they must of had
Learn to be grateful for even the small things
You will quickly see this is what makes our lives worth living

Submitted on 2006-01-07 06:12:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow... i am in aw. such wonderful flow, and gushing with moral values which I will always think about from here on out.

Seriously, this has changed my life.

I love you. ... marry me?
| Posted on 2006-01-07 00:00:00 | by mrmundane | [ Reply to This ]
  Hi Dawn.

A very inspirational and practical piece. Well written and put across very well indeed. Hope you had a nice Xmas, and 2006 wil be great for you also.

| Posted on 2006-01-07 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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