Description: Well what can I say - This is my place I cry for it all. Where you remember the things that broke your heart and pick it up and carry on.
Rose Tears -------------------------------------------
Walk across the fields and into the house
Stand still in the room and cry rose tears
Feel her heart become heavy and shatter at her feet
Her pain on the walls for all to see
How did she come to stand so still?
In this house of rose tears and blood fears
When did this room become her soul’s new home?
She is completely under siege in this war zone
Feel the earth shudder,
As one more memory floods back
Of a gypsy girl’s heart under attack.
Feel the walls start to crack as she thinks
To a time when all she wanted was to be
Loved and was broken and bound.
How did she come to stand so still?
In this house of blood fears and fresh scars
Everyday she finds time to heal a little more
To smile at angels that knock on her door
But sometimes she still walks across those fields
To stand in the room and cry rose tears for it all.
i liked this poem and i don'r really read these kind of poems but this one caught my eye and it caught me and it cried out to me and maybe your kind of poetry will make it further then mine
This is really good. I haven't read much like this. Grant it i do read alot of writings that are good but this is one i think is really good. Keep up the good work because someday you might be a writer and if so oi will buy your books.
Submission Name: Rose Tears
