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    dots Submission Name: All For Youdots
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    Author: metalman_21
    ASL Info:    17/m/NE
    Elite Ratio:    2.58 - 30/42/17
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 147
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 502



    Description:
       This is a dark poem, that gets lighter towards the end of it. I think it has some pretty good imagery in it, but feel free to nail me as much as you want!


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    dotsAll For Youdots
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    Words are worthless inside silent songs,
    that speak to the deaf,
    and bleed for the blind.
    A mind once lost in an abysmal hell,
    now saved by the light of a new love./

    Arms that used to bleed now mend themselves,
    as the warmth of another's heart cascades across them.
    Feeling returns,
    to the cold flesh of a torn soul./

    Reborn is the one,
    who walked a path of misery and angst,
    for he now walks in beauty./




    Submitted on 2006-01-07 14:43:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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