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    dots Submission Name: Promisedots
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    Author: ArtichokeMosher
    ASL Info:    15/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 146/201/81
    Words: 163
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 204
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1159



    Description:
       My b/f was really upset about something the other night and was threatening to hurt himself.I stayed up worried sick about him and no matter how bad I wanted to sleep I couldnt...I hope you like it.


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    dotsPromisedots
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    I cant sleep...
    Worrying about you.
    As the pain digs deep...
    My eyes fill with tears.

    All this worry won't make me stronger...
    Please promise me you wont...
    Please promise to hold on longer...
    And please promise me that longer is forever.

    Chorus:
    Please baby save me from this fear...
    Of worry...
    Please baby I need you here...
    Please promise me...tonight...

    I don't want you to go...
    Into a world with no friends...
    Into a world you dont know...
    A world where you'll start over.

    I'd have to join you...
    For I don't want to see you leave.
    Through all we've been and will go through...
    Babe I need you here with me....tonight.

    Chorus:
    Please baby save me from this fear...
    Of worry...
    Please baby I need you here...
    Please promise me...tonight...

    Baby please promise to stay..
    I need you here with me.
    Baby promise to never go away...
    Becuase I can assure you...our love is true.




    Submitted on 2006-01-07 19:48:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      well its good its nice but wats the deal wit so many ppl tryin to suicide????true love exists but for a short period only lol..anyways check out my stuff n comment thx ciao
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~SEAN~~~~~~~~~~~
    | Posted on 2006-01-08 00:00:00 | by anooplokur | [ Reply to This ]
      i love this!hehe im ur first commenter!yay! well my ex isnt gonna hurt himself hes just not here anymore so the chorus spoke to me a lot! this is going to be a fav!how is ur boyfriend is he okay?
    ~akaila~
    | Posted on 2006-01-07 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]



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