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    dots Submission Name: Relation Shipdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 698
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 517



    Description:
       There is a kool ink drawing that I did simultaneously with this write which adds to the visual but you'll just have to come up with your own (or I'm sending it out via deep thought right now....)


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    dotsRelation Shipdots
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    Thoughts & Dreams
    Aloft
    afloat clouds so
    soft
    Image mirrored in
    One
    Rising moon, setting
    Son
    Adrift of me
    Sea
    I am now
    He
    And us all
    We
    Together in eternity
    flight
    Intertwined dawn, dusk,
    Night
    Excalibur slave too
    Sword
    Faithful of Service
    Lord
    In ladies all
    Dance
    partner in man's
    chance
    character, mind,
    circumstance




    Submitted on 2004-04-27 16:47:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      well the titles slightly misleading(but i'm guilty of that too; so it's ok). with the format you give it it kind of reads fast, i'm not sure that's deliberate but if not i guess just a coma here and there, anyways it was a nice read
    | Posted on 2006-03-30 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      By the way, dadaism is a type of art that has no meaning, like a sculpture with no purpose, or an abstract peice drawn by a child (assuming it does not symbolize anything) lol, but of caurse, you already knew what dadaism was-
    | Posted on 2004-04-27 00:00:00 | by bloodwing | [ Reply to This ]


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