nice it is good to see a good brain at work more grease to that elbow that put it down in black and white but one too many times or once till many times would have a better effect on poeple but on the general it is a very nice work
This is amazing! Sometimes a poem does not have to be loads of stanzas for it to be powerful. This is one of those. It has passion and moves that small place that we all have that remembers when we felt just like that.