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    dots Submission Name: One To Many Timesdots

    Author: ragdoll94
    Elite Ratio:    1.3 - 15/12/4
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsOne To Many Timesdots

    One to many time have I cut my arm
    One to many times have I brought the world harm
    One to many times have I promised to more tears
    One to many times have I cried over the years

    One to many times have I slit my wrist
    One to many times have I been kissed
    One to many times have I said I love you
    One to many times have I said things untrue

    One to many times have I cried
    One to many times have I died

    By: Tyler Charleston and Haley Fandel
    RagDoll stitchez

    Submitted on 2006-01-08 00:19:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I see what you mean by this poem being wrote weird. It's a good start though. Just keep practicing

    | Posted on 2007-03-06 00:00:00 | by brknprclndol | [ Reply to This ]
      fantastic write My son.
    I see you and your sister have many talents.
    I would like to see more of your work posted on here.
    Keep up the family talent.

    -The Mother-
    | Posted on 2006-01-16 00:00:00 | by rigor3 | [ Reply to This ]
      this was flippin awesome i liked it.i find that i always write better when someone helps. Keep up the good work.

    Love, Serinity Blade
    | Posted on 2006-01-09 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      nice it is good to see a good brain at work more grease to that elbow that put it down in black and white but one too many times or once till many times would have a better effect on poeple but on the general it is a very nice work
    | Posted on 2006-01-08 00:00:00 | by kingsley | [ Reply to This ]
      This is amazing! Sometimes a poem does not have to be loads of stanzas for it to be powerful. This is one of those. It has passion and moves that small place that we all have that remembers when we felt just like that.

    I love it! Keep it coming x
    | Posted on 2006-01-08 00:00:00 | by sunraybutterfly | [ Reply to This ]

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