whoa, i didn't see that coming. it's nice(not that your others weren't). i can see how this can be a love poem, i'm gonna guess though like i can relate too you had trouble in deciding a category. it could be my take though. this piece along with many seem to have a certain subtelty to them, an underlying tranquility. bye now
i think u want us to focus on the words ages, sages, ocean and motion, but i also think that it would do the structure much more good if you included the words in the lines itself.
have very good stanzas. but i dint understand y did ya give that title to the poem?? hardly matches!!! but i have to say ur word choice was very good, and it can flow really well if u structure it properly!!