This was really cute. I liked how you described her as your beautiful little stranger. That's different. But I'll have to agree with The Black Rose that it wasn't very detailed...but, even with the detail that you gave, I still liked it. And, thank you for commenting on my poems Mystery Revealed and Silent Echoes.
Could have been more descriptive, but I know how words can fail to describe the people whom we long for... It makes me think that you were just concentrting on her... well, you know what- you mentioned it alredy... 'supple -'
I like the idea of this poem but it's not very detailed. Maybe you should try to elaborate on how she made you feel and how she looked. Simple details like her legs or smile, you know what I mean. All and all it's pretty fair.