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    dots Submission Name: essense of lifedots

    Author: EV2884
    ASL Info:    21years/female/michigan
    Elite Ratio:    2.88 - 53/48/15
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Vampire
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    dotsessense of lifedots

    in ancient days
    in ancient times
    i was one that
    held on to the spark of
    they called it the
    essense of life

    as i sit here, i watch
    the blood pour out
    of every pore
    watching my essense of life
    escape me.

    i lay down waiting for
    death's embrace but
    he does not show
    only the one that
    show is the life giver
    he bares down on
    my essence of life

    he has given me back
    my essense of life and more
    he has given me a second
    chance of life.

    now i stand next to him
    waiting for the sun
    as we hold on to each
    other like romeo and juliet
    the essense of life is fading

    the sun has risen and we now burn
    and the essense of life is gone.

    Submitted on 2006-01-08 11:34:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      im guessing u ahd a bf or gf and use broke up then got bak to together and then broke up again well i know what its like trying to make things work but sometimes u hav 2 let go of the things u love
    | Posted on 2006-01-08 00:00:00 | by Red Liquid | [ Reply to This ]

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