gallons of booze
careless moments of heat
earth to earth
pretty lil pills
a puff of smoke
ashes to ashes
dust to dust
| Merry Meet Sanjhana. I liked this one. It actually reminded me of my drug addiction. (It's ok I have 9 years clean.) But I was impressed with the way you put your poem in 3 stanzas and got the point across. Not alot of poeple can do that. I know I can't do it very often. Good job. Blessed Be Andrea||| Posted on 2007-02-16 00:00:00 | by magickandie | [ Reply to This ] || I too liked this idea|
You spoke of how the day moves and the different chemicals and things we use to move forward in Life
One thing I have been thinking of a lot lately is why do we as humans always rush the day instead of sitting back and reflecting off of the beuty of the day
And Thank You for the recent comments
Please know they help me grow as a writer
|| Posted on 2006-01-12 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] || Yeah, a nice little idea you have here.|
I like the trilogy way you've styled it, I'd also like to see a version using metaphors instead of the graphic descriptions, that would be interesting.
Well done, i liked this little piece.
|| Posted on 2006-01-08 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ] |