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    dots Submission Name: A Winter's Daydots
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    Author: Smee
    ASL Info:    17/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 28/33/11
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 151
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       Just tried to think of different ways to express this horrible day outside.


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    dotsA Winter's Daydots
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    A grey filled sky
    Like frosted glass
    Specks of birds adorn.
    A murky cold
    An empty wind
    A dismal winter’s morn.

    A tumbled gust
    Re-curves a branch
    Then flicks from back to forth.
    It lifts a leaf
    Which plummets slowly
    And drifts forever north.

    Behind this pane
    I watch the day
    Age towards its end.
    Sky fades to red
    A day that needed
    A sun with which to lend.




    Submitted on 2006-01-08 15:53:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the imagery in this one. Winter days may be boring, but, their also so beautiful. It seems to me that's what this piece was trying to say.
    | Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by darkened_soul | [ Reply to This ]
      well it shows what a wintery day is, boreing and dull, if it was me i would have expressed my self a bit better on what a winter day is, but then again thats just me.

    -phil-
    | Posted on 2006-01-08 00:00:00 | by morriscool4 | [ Reply to This ]



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