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    dots Submission Name: A Far Away Land...dots
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    Author: Kalyiel
    ASL Info:    17/F/Bucharest, Romania
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 53/65/21
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 192
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 727



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       Just a train of thought, actually. Not my best piece, mere impressions. This is what I've always thought and one day it occurred to me that I should put it on paper, as well.


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    dotsA Far Away Land...dots
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    People will never understand each other the way they should. They will never see things from another point of view. Because there is no way of understanding a hidden universe, and there is no other point of view. There are just thousands and thousands of parallel worlds, one for each person, none like the others. Each person has a universe, to do with it what they wish. Each universe is locked and unseen to the others, and not even its master can unlock it.

    People should never try to understand each other, nor ask to be understood. They should just love each other, and love each other's universe. Because love creates the only world everybody can see... It creates the only world we can all live in.




    Submitted on 2006-01-08 16:29:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I definately think you present some interesting ideas here, but I guess I see things differently. I do believe that there are a select few if not just one that we can invite into our universe. I think that's what a soulmate is, someone who might not dwell all of our universe, but at least a good portion of it. Does that make sense?
    Anyway, this is definately thought provoking. I think you've inspired me to write something.
    Thanks for sharing this.
    Nicely.
    | Posted on 2006-01-09 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]
      Very beautifully said
    Love is the key
    Llike The Beatles said All You Need is Love
    And there right World Peace is so easy with Love
    I enjoyed reading this write as it definately made me think
    Great Job
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-01-09 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Not a bad little statement, it would also work well with my view on religion and the meaning of life.

    It's nice to get a profound view down, and even better to spread it around.

    I like it, anyhow

    be happy

    Graeme
    | Posted on 2006-01-08 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]



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