I searched for you God
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Weird for me...I know but it's how I feel. If you don't like it tough, oh well I can't keep everyone happy. Bash it all you want, you're just bashing the truth. God loves us all not just Baptists, Catholics, Methodists, or Muslims, or Buddhists...he loves everyone and everyone should stop destroying his teachings through his prophets. (i e Muhamed (sp), Buddha, Jesus, the Saints, Emily Rose, et cetera)
Blessed Be
Blessed Be
I searched for you God
I searched for you God always looking in the world Searching by practices forbidden by lore Never finding the answer to What this life is for? Searching in humans the picture of your son But I never found the light of which the book says is in store Instead I found you God the one who loves us all You never cared great God what we did to honor you The humans I looked in were all just sinners The picture of you God is in Heaven forevermore I thank you for showing me the truth of the lore That religion is nothing we (follow) the same One I wish we had realized all those lives we could have saved With this bit of knowledge We could all love again |
Submitted on 2006-01-09 10:41:37 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Yeah, a bit bumpy, but lovely nevetheless. I liked it. If it is an utopia, its a good one. Whats wrong about writing poems involving ones utopia, when so many write about their hells? I liked the fact that your stanzas had only two lines. It was very easy and comfortable to read it... | Posted on 2006-02-09 00:00:00 | by ChrystalR | [ Reply to This ] | I really look up to you for having to guts to talk about your religion, and your beliefs aloud. It was a good poem except that it was a little bumpy. | | Posted on 2006-01-09 00:00:00 | by alcoholcaust | [ Reply to This ] | Nice, um I think I would disagree with what you said about the Bible, but other wise it was an interesting opion. It is a beatiful dream your utopia, to bad it could never come true. Your line we the same one, I found stumbling. It did not flow so well, with a little oil you could refine your peice. | | Posted on 2006-01-09 00:00:00 | by Kalis | [ Reply to This ] | |
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