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The Hunter pt 3

Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 333 /325 /104
Words: 214
Class/Type: Story /Vampire
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okay as much as i love...ppl not commenting my stories..i still find the time to write and post disrespect lol. But anyways if you actually do feel like helping me grow as a writer, comment and tell me what you can i improve...did you like it..if not why..if you did why..stuff like that. I know, and you know i'm not going to change my whole story because you don't like it...i'm just going take into consideration what you think and how i can improve my story. Oh and i did a whole bunch of research on Vampires (due to my lack of anything better to do.) and more than one sources say that vampires can come out in the day light..they just lose there powers. In my story i follow that to a sense. Only the Sires (in my story the first Vampires.) can do that with the excpetion of Gemini and someone else but you'll see why later, anyways here it is.

The Hunter pt 3

Mystic sighed as he opened his eyes. The sun was setting and he had just awoken by the noise of someone moving around. He looked as the sun disapeared and stood up. He was shirtless, showing off his well toned shirtless chest and wearing blue levis.
"Andrew how nice of you to visit." he said standing up.
Andrew appeared in a black business suit with a smirk on his face, "Mystic i see you like sleeping with the rats."
Mystic looked at the dirty basment he was in and said in a calm voice, "Hmmm my rats are clean compared to the women you sleep with."
Andrew just looked at him and said in disqust, "Well..i'm happy you think that way brother. You know why i'm here."
"I's true, but i'm not going to help you."
"It's to be understood you still love her..though that doesn't explain why she left you."
When Andrew was talking he didn't notice Gemini enter the basment. She looked at the back of his head for a second and the looked at Mystic who simply returned her gaze.
"I didn't leave him Andrew."
Andrew turned around and smiled at Gemini saying, "Just the woman i was looking for."
"You're just the last person i wanted to see."

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