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    dots Submission Name: Eyesdots
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    Author: ira
    ASL Info:    20.f.ca
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 234/267/172
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 236
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsEyesdots
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    Darkness
    a memory of you
    sitting there
    so still...
    Consuming souls
    consuming light
    help them pray tonight.
    glass windows black and corse
    give nothing but remorse
    to all those who have seen your eyes
    demon darkness of my life
    lover deep like breathe of valor
    soul cretin
    one who first gave me power.
    Searching through the caverns of mind
    memory painting shades on the rise.
    give them back folds of nine
    consume their darkest desires, make them mine
    and all I see is your eyes.
    No harm done when they can’t see past it
    nothing to be done
    when they don’t ask it.
    Nothing to wish when desires fail
    nothing to hope for, no avail.
    Darkness
    a small but true memory of you
    sitting with your head held high
    eyes burning with the metallic demise.
    Everything you had given them
    turning out to be a lie
    and even though
    I see it now
    all but then, I know exactly how....
    I wonder now
    how all I saw
    made me love you the more.
    Darkness
    all I ever saw were your eyes.






    Submitted on 2006-01-09 18:16:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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