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    dots Submission Name: Never Forgavedots
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    Author: ArtichokeMosher
    ASL Info:    15/F/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 146/201/81
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 226
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    dotsNever Forgavedots
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    As the night closes in,
    The pain will begin.
    My scabs and scars bleed within,
    As my body lays down with sin.

    I'm surprised you didn't break,
    From all this pain you had to take.
    For now I will never awake.
    This death is not a fake.

    All the wrong decisions I must have made,
    For heart to shallow away in a darkened cascade.
    Tonight I was laid,
    For my life to fade.

    As I lay with you tonight,
    I wish to make everything right.
    Laying in the fading light,
    Nothing seems alright.

    Laying in a hole in the ground,
    No one else but you is around.
    My soul is lost and unfound.
    No other people surround.

    Tonight I lay buried under this grave.
    Burried my forgotten soul in a muddy cave.
    Now my soul is somethin you cannot save...
    Forgotten but never forgave.




    Submitted on 2006-01-09 18:52:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow what amazing poetry i think that you should'nt change anything about this poem it brings out everything a poem and the poet is looking for the way that this poem brings out the soul of life and death but also life in it all i can say is keep it up with the poetry that is like this one and i am adding it to my favorites i liked it that much
    | Posted on 2006-01-09 00:00:00 | by EV2884 | [ Reply to This ]



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