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    dots Submission Name: Prophetic wordsdots
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    Author: heavy knowledge
    ASL Info:    15/m/slidell, L.a.(N.O.)
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 106/156/34
    Words: 673
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 877
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    Bytes: 4382



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    Verse 1
    Back in the era of the Greeks it was prophesized
    That such unjust tyrants would be ostracized
    You might think my lyrics are a little absurd
    But please listen 2 my words
    So lyrically inclined the contend amongst the divine
    The blood flows through my veins as it flows up 2 my mind
    Yet my veins never speak a word o vanity
    My oral cavity just gives knowledge 2 humanity
    A hip hop prophet or a rapper with deep thoughts
    Spiritually endowed this shit was never taught
    Complexity so heavily laid down lyrically on this pad
    But the prophetic holocaust is not over no reason 2 be glad
    Armageddon like a kiloton blast multiplied exponentially
    And hating words turn from kinetic energy into potentially
    Potentially cause a boy 2 lose all hopes in his dreams
    Till he grows up 2 be a prophet named Chaz or so it seems

    Chorus
    Prophets aren&#8217;t born just divinely told what 2 say
    Sometimes tools of war 2 our uncontrollable dismay
    Prophetically uplifting people yet this job doesn&#8217;t pay
    Molding my poetically lyrical gift into prophecy man this shit hard
    (2x)

    Verse 2
    Yeah this shit hard writing and thinking upon prophecies
    Preaching about real talk not guns, drugs and misogyny
    My prophetic mind seeing thought of quiet suicide
    Tainted eyes of the badge label it a homicide
    But prophets are never loved just discarded 2 the side
    The point of no return where lyrics and prophecies collide
    Giving the populous a prophetic eargasims
    I&#8217;m not rhymicly random but still giving people spazisms
    Prophesizing thinking as if I was Jesus at this current time
    Let the corner be my cross and the crucifix be my nine
    They have 16 in the clip so add 3 nails and 1 spear
    That&#8217;s 4 holotips out the chamber into my rear
    Ideology he was labeled the king of Jesus transformed 2 the prince of the game
    He utters why have you forsaken me I just utter out is name
    Female paramedics named Mary haul me away
    The prophecy turns black and I&#8217;m thrusted back into day

    Chorus
    Prophets aren&#8217;t born just divinely told what 2 say
    Sometimes tools of war 2 our uncontrollable dismay
    Prophetically uplifting people yet this job doesn&#8217;t pay
    Molding my poetically lyrical gift into prophecy man this shit hard
    (2x)

    Verse 3
    Some prophecies end while other seem to begin
    Prophesized how some foes turn into friends
    In class daydreaming into another foreshowed thought
    Viewing holes in they&#8217;re arms and dialed pupils, people in which life has caught
    They say life catches up 2 you I just hope I cross the line ahead
    My prophetically inclined eyes see differently and I see myself dead
    Another tainted skinned male in the obituary preacher saying good quotes
    It turns black I am gone and all u hear is the notes
    Then u note this boys not a rapper he was a prophet
    We said he was crazy and we tried 2 stop it
    They realized 2 late now I&#8217;m 6ft below the ground
    Prophetic words silenced voice box never again making a lyrical sound
    But this is my duty as a prophet some call me a mayter
    Its been this way forever people speaking prophecies brought 2 the slaughter
    Songs like a lyrical bible the book of prophets Chaz 9:23
    Forgotten alive remembered in death watch you&#8217;ll see

    Chorus
    Prophets aren&#8217;t born just divinely told what 2 say
    Sometimes tools of war 2 our uncontrollable dismay
    Prophetically uplifting people yet this job doesn&#8217;t pay
    Molding my poetically lyrical gift into prophecy man this shit hard
    (2x)

    Yeah I know they have bible prophets but I&#8217;m talking about real prophets Tupac and Biggie they are some hood prophets that&#8217;s real, Nas he getting there, Alliyah and Left Eye Lopez, Big Pun and Jam Master Jay and to all my other lyrical prophets that pasted I&#8217;m put my blood that I&#8217;m going to rep u hard believe that ~1~




    Submitted on 2006-01-09 21:08:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey hows things thanx for your comments made
    as you see on the site this poem will carry on and on next year it will be published hopefully under my real name and sandman still running from the devil of life
    yors was a great post and i see lots of comments i liked reading so far as it will tell a story to as it said verse 1 i will be looking to read the rest
    all the best keep posting
    sandman
    | Posted on 2006-01-25 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      dang dude this took me like an hour to read! lol! j.k but it was good...tho some of the words was kinda big...((maybe i need to go back to class and read that book))lol! ya but this was good and long! but i liked it! kool!

    Fore<3r Love,
    xxAmber
    | Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]
      Whoah baby boi! You put it down right on tis track. I loved it. The way you added in history to show you are a lyrical prophet in the begining. Very clever. I love the vibe of this. It was rough, without being to in your face. I like the flow and your rhyming was off the heezy. It' gonna take a while to asorb all the knowledge you were kickin' to us readers. Great job. Another fav!

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      I think i'm to young to fully understand the extent of your words...jusk kidding. I"m in love with this rap...or maybe the concept of this rap. Maybe idk. But it was hot and you should keep writing..*gasp* omg we're the same age lol.

    Danni
    ~~The Real Hiphop Princess~~~
    | Posted on 2006-01-19 00:00:00 | by Poeticprincess | [ Reply to This ]
      this is alot of reading but i'm glad i cheked in thanx for the comment on inspiration your words are alwaz appreciated
    i like the style you write kinda in your face censored * f**k you all thats the best way to be
    hope all is good with you
    thanx sandman
    | Posted on 2006-01-11 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      that's why i break my songs down into three different verses. it was too long. ur rhyming was great, probably the best that i've ever seen from u. on the other hand, the flow seemed too damn simple. the first verse was the best, the second verse sounded something like the second verse of one mic. still it's gonna be a fave
    | Posted on 2006-01-10 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      i think its a bit long for a song..but it reads really well! your imagery is top notch and i cant really fault it, except for the length!
    Keep on chugging, cuz your getting somewhere!
    | Posted on 2006-01-10 00:00:00 | by bambi144 | [ Reply to This ]
      damn man, this [censored] make me think of a lighter hearted "point of no return" immortal technique... its good man, I can't really think of how it would be rapped and [censored]...but I"m sure you got that all good

    deuce
    the aberrant soldier
    | Posted on 2006-01-09 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]


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