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    dots Submission Name: Little Brotherdots
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    Author: nodrelsnef
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 22/32/29
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 175
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    dotsLittle Brotherdots
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    Little Brother

    Little brother on the
    Floor. Eyes to meet
    They come no more,
    Why you lie there in
    The dirt? For what reason
    God desert? Did you sin in
    Days gone past? Or driven
    Mad by dice were cast?
    Do you feel, cry you
    Tears? Know what demons
    Brought you here?

    Little brother on the
    Floor. Lacking food or
    Blanket warm. Your hands are
    Black, soul of ice. Are you mad
    Or living Christ? May I leave
    Or need I stay? “Tender cloak,
    A voice to pray.
    Leave not this cup
    To me,” I say.
    “Lift his head up off the
    Floor.” But eyes to meet
    They come no more.





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