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    dots Submission Name: Me Againdots
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    Author: jessie thomas
    ASL Info:    24/F/Alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.13 - 299/338/79
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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       I wrote this because...I dunno...It's what I felt.


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    dotsMe Againdots
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    Losing me,
    My art, my life.
    Now your gone
    And I'm me again

    I'm writing
    I'm crying
    Slowly beginning to feel

    I'm back,
    I'm me,
    And I'm alone.

    And I love it




    Submitted on 2006-01-10 21:27:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this poem. It reminds me a lot of myself. You lose the one you love, and you're gone with him ,and all your art goes to sh*t and you don't think you'll ever be right again. And I'm still not, but I'm on my way back. And you find your independance, and are free to dance... It's a beautiful thing...
    | Posted on 2006-01-20 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      Angry with someone are we Little One? I'm glad you took it out this way short sweet and no violence. I just need to know who to smack for making you angry.
    Lotta Lovin
    Mike
    | Posted on 2006-01-12 00:00:00 | by sageeriol | [ Reply to This ]
      this was good a very enjoyable read easy to understand and had a good meaning ti the thought process
    great write
    sandman
    | Posted on 2006-01-11 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      The poem, I liked it. I just think it could have been longer describing what you have lost. When you get more desriptive that is what shows a truely great poet.
    | Posted on 2006-01-11 00:00:00 | by Evil Jesture | [ Reply to This ]
      What i got out of the poem was that you had lost your muse per say, and you retreaved it. Plus that being alone is part of your inspiration. Good Poem and emotion, could use some more discriptive words like Daniel said.
    | Posted on 2006-01-10 00:00:00 | by DiamondTears | [ Reply to This ]


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