I really like this poem. It reminds me a lot of myself. You lose the one you love, and you're gone with him ,and all your art goes to sh*t and you don't think you'll ever be right again. And I'm still not, but I'm on my way back. And you find your independance, and are free to dance... It's a beautiful thing...
Angry with someone are we Little One? I'm glad you took it out this way short sweet and no violence. I just need to know who to smack for making you angry. Lotta Lovin Mike
The poem, I liked it. I just think it could have been longer describing what you have lost. When you get more desriptive that is what shows a truely great poet.
What i got out of the poem was that you had lost your muse per say, and you retreaved it. Plus that being alone is part of your inspiration. Good Poem and emotion, could use some more discriptive words like Daniel said.
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